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The Novella That Refused to Grow Up

9/4/2011

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The Circling Song is on Kindle. For a few months, it performed very strongly on Authonomy and received some very nice comments from some very respected sources. It got into double figures – just but there are a lot of books on there! I was proud that it was championed on a good number of occasions by writers whose work leaves most standing.

Several people suggested that I expand it to novel length (at 30-odd thousand words, it qualifies as a novella) in order to get the interest of a publisher. Many times, I read it through looking for natural points that could be used as growth points – buds, which could sprout a couple of extra sub-plots or take the story off in another direction.  But to no avail.

At first, I was frustrated but eventually, I came to realise that the story would suffer if I made any changes just for the sake of it.  The advice was, I’m sure, well-intentioned but I think the starting point for those offering it was that I wanted it to be published more than anything else.

Of course, I wanted it to be published – still do – and I know that novellas don't apparently sell anymore but I couldn't bring myself to spoil, (as I saw it) a pretty solid story.  Ergo, I didn’t want it published more than anything else; I wanted it to remain a strong, powerful and entertaining story – which it is.

Hubris?  Possibly.  Laziness?  That’s what worries me.  Did I try hard enough?  Well, I think I did. The story is complete and its success lies in its readability.  Most people who begin reading, finish it and all who do, enjoy it.  That tells me it works.

I also have to say how delighted I was to finally upload it in a format that retains the epistolary nature of the original pretty well.  It took some doing, I can tell you and, as always with Kindle, much depends on the font size one chooses.  I recommend as small as possible with the minimum line spacing.

Anyway, if it sells well, I’ll submit the paperback version for those who have yet to bow to the inevitable.
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Diane link
10/4/2011 07:35:22 am

Hello - redirected from Authonomy so your post worked. I might well go and have a look at this on Kindle I am looking for a new read just now anyway. It is an interesting point about story length. I have reached the conclusion that they come with their own length predetermined and messing with it too much doesn't work. Hope you are well. - Diane

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11/4/2011 08:05:41 am

Hello - Just letting you know I have just donated slightly over one earth pound to your Kindle collection fund and am now looking forward to reading The Circling Song - Cheers - diane

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